Soooo yeah, a new page. I did this page a little differently than the last ones. It was drawn/colored at twice my regular dpi size but it still looks the same. Only difference is it took longer to color because of the Photoshop file being so huge.

A few things have changed with the site too. I redid the cover for this comic so if you go back to the first page you can see the new design. And Tais' and Telos' dad has been added to the Cast page. I'm working on adding their 2 moms in the next few weeks.

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I really like this manga story!! I will definately keep myself updated with this, you are a good writer :))! Although, I'd like to give a little constructive criticism. The faces/bodies seem a bit disproportionate, you might want to work on your drawing skills. Other than that, it's amazing!

GuestLadyRaven-Thanks for reading and commenting! I'm glad you like the way the story is heading.And i definitely don't mind a little constructive criticism. I tend to rush on my pages so i've noticed that their heads are slightly too large as well. I just need to slow down and proof my work before i begin inking and coloring. Oh and thanks for the comment about my writing. Im really new to script writing so i tend to struggle a little on dialog.I was even thinking of finding a proof reader to help lol.

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you are quite welcome, my friend! Well if you ever need a proofreader, I can be your lady! :D haha. And yea, you shouldn't rush through it, you should take as much time as you need :))